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Since advanced critique is encouraged I'd have to say the angular composition and stiff anatomy ruins the picture a bit. I think more use of curved bodies and anything diagonal on the picture would've made the picture much more dynamic. If you wanted more dynamicity (is that a word?) then I would suggest portrayal of a pillow fight.
A pillow fight sounds like too much conflict, and it easily becomes stereotypical. I wanted something more subtle.